Saturday, October 11, 2014

Wrong Dinosaur

Seriously-- a year?!?!?! A whole f**king YEAR since my last post?!?!?!?!

That's just taking the piss, that is.

Oh, and what a year it's been. Lot of personal stuff I won't go into here (odd of me, I know-- but I did have that year, remember...), but mostly it's been the year of the Book That Damn Near Broke Me.


Seriously, I think I came closer to quitting than ever before. Days would pass, sometimes as much as a week, where I would dutifully sit in front of my screen and stare. Just... stare.

Y'see, I had this bright idea: I was going to polish up all those rough drafts I've got sitting around and trot them out the door. I put in the months of writing them, it'd be nice if folks got to read them, right?

Wrong.

I picked out a tidy little thriller. Young woman comes home after a long absence, trouble ensues. Pretty straight ahead.

If I'd just hit the spellcheck and sent it on its way, life would have been different. But noooooo... I was missing stuff. All this great potential between her and the Sheriff, and her and the local crime boss, and I skated right past it. I skated past a lot of things.

I told myself, "I'll just flesh it out some."

Yeah, right.

Maybe 2000 words of that original draft survived. Once I started going deeper into my heroine's family, her history, and the way those bonds pull at us, my old plot didn't work. My ending didn't work. My beginning changed.

I had to rethink my dinosaur.



When I was a kid, T Rex stood upright. My wee plastic dinosaurs had him standing straight up, just like the skeletons in the museums. (Old picture of one up top) Oh, and he lumbered too. I remember that. Turns out, we all had it wrong. T Rex was a low--crouching, fast-moving nightmare.

Hopefully the new book will be too.

PRODIGAL will be available before Christmas. I hope. :)

5 comments:

Angie said...

Steve -- hey, great to see you again! And cheers on getting the book done, especially since it sounded like it was a bear of a rewrite. Those suck, but it feels great to finish and see how much better it became after all the work, yes? :D

Angie

Charles Gramlich said...

Sounds like you've been through a war, man. Glad you survived.

Steve Malley said...

Hi Angie,

To tell the truth, I've been so close to this for so long, I have no idea if it even *is* better. I hope so, but...

Steve Malley said...

Hey Charles,

Survived, and gearing up to write the next. Might try some NaNo action, see if I can bang out a first draft in a month!

Oh, and happy birthday!! :)

RK Sterling said...

Hey, don't feel bad - my "post before last" was TWO years ago, and I'm just now reading this three months after the fact. :)

So, you're well up-to-date and current in comparison. Glad to see you're writing again, even if it has been a bear. :)